Here we are again! Time has completely flown by since last year's Halloweensie and I'm barely making the deadline. The rules are that the entry must be no more than 100 words and include trick, cobweb and potion.
You can find out all the deets at https://susannahill.com/category/halloweensie-contest/
So, without further ado........ drumroll please........., here is my 2019 entry!
Happy Halloween(sie)!
The Magic of Glynnis McDoo
A Halloween Story of 93 words
Gather round, little goblins, and I'll tell you
about the midnight ride of Glynnis McDoo.
You'll guess, of course
that she rode on a horse,
a theory that I will undo.
That inky night when the moon was high,
bats circled above in the velvety sky.
She rubbed on some lotion,
It turned out to be potion
dropped by a witch swooping by.
Cobwebs covered the lights on the street,
Glynnis wondered, trick or a treat?
She hopped on a broom,
flew right out of the room,
and her Halloween night was complete!
10 comments:
Fun rhyme! Good luck!
What imagery! and fun to read.
I like the living rhyme. Good luck, Beth.
Make me wonder about Paul Revere's steed....hmmm, LOL. Great job! Good luck!
Thank you! Just glad got this goal off the list! 🎃
Thanks so much! 🎃
Thanks, Kathy! 🎃
??? Paul Revere? Thanks for the luck!
Super cute story and fun rhymes. I loved the intro of Glynnis Mcdoo (fun name too)! Best of luck to you! (I think reading your story made me inadvertently rhyme lol)
love this concept. i think you should develop it more and build it out into picture book length!
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